Asad A Awan
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Pic 1 would be my vote for best...
Dec 20, 2016,06:33 AM
...but Pic 2 would be fantastic in a different setting, not so much a standing pose on street but a more expansive view in the background would make that pose very appealing, in my opinion..similarly, pic 3 is brilliant but a view of the stretch into which she is looking would add perspective to the pose...but i have no real knowledge of photography or modelling at all so those are just views based on nothing really...great work and thanks for sharing.
regards
Asad
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eyes open or eyes shut...which do you prefer?
By: ThomasM : December 19th, 2016-18:30
exposure differences aside (that can always be corrected in post) which do you prefer, eyes open or eyes closed? 1. 2. and what do you think of these? of 1, 2, 3, 4 which do you prefer and why? Or do you not like any of them (which is ok too, these were f...
Eyes Open!
By: Bounce781 : December 19th, 2016-18:57
Pic 1 is good. Pic 4 is nice but slight out of focus.
Picture #1.
By: Skyrider01 : December 19th, 2016-19:40
1 is the best. then #3.
Open.
By: InHavenPro : December 19th, 2016-21:26
Yes, eyes open is definitely the highest quality shot of the selection. Everything falls together harmoniously! Cheers, Filip
Pic 1 [nt]
By: davudvl : December 19th, 2016-22:37
#2 and #4
By: Alkiro1 : December 19th, 2016-22:41
#2 because the model is more pensive and I prefer like that. But the light is probably better on the #1 #4 because the smile is top! Best wishes Alkiro
My pleasure
By: Alkiro1 : December 20th, 2016-04:39
Best wishes Alkiro
Eyes open!
By: Speedie74 aka Mr. Torquise : December 19th, 2016-23:52
Picture 1!! Who is the Model? Yours, Adam
She's a registered nurse with an interest in...
By: ThomasM : December 20th, 2016-04:35
Make up, so I asked if she'd be interested in getting in front of the camera. Our first time together, and she has very little experience (but seems to be a fast learner)
shut for me....
By: Baron - Mr Red : December 20th, 2016-01:12
.....provides less clues....more mystery
I agree. Pic 2.
By: M4 : December 20th, 2016-03:57
It's a more suggestive pose that engages the observers imagination.
Thanks, m4 ...
By: ThomasM : December 20th, 2016-04:37
Good comment, I like it!
Eyes open
By: dedestexhes : December 20th, 2016-04:13
And Picture 3. Dirk
Well
By: dedestexhes : December 20th, 2016-05:44
It represents for me holding onto the now, the reality, tradition while but looking into the future. Perfect example from your other post of today
Thomas, you old dog!
By: TheMadDruid : December 20th, 2016-05:49
You've done it again! Eyes open. Or shut. Both. Picture #1 and picture #2 both capture a sense of "ingenue" for me. Equally. I like both theses pictures a lot.
#2.
By: TheMadDruid : December 20th, 2016-09:30
Definitely.
Yes.
By: TheMadDruid : December 20th, 2016-12:34
It could have been hours. I left my watch on the bed stand.
lol
By: ThomasM : December 20th, 2016-10:22
ahwooooooooooooo! Lol ingenue, huh? nice...thanks!
Pic 1 would be my vote for best...
By: Asad A Awan : December 20th, 2016-06:33
...but Pic 2 would be fantastic in a different setting, not so much a standing pose on street but a more expansive view in the background would make that pose very appealing, in my opinion..similarly, pic 3 is brilliant but a view of the stretch into whic...
very interesting comments and suggestions, much appreciated!
By: ThomasM : December 20th, 2016-10:24
the fact that you aren't deeply into photography or modeling lends a different weight to your comment, one without all the baggage of formalism and what is expected from "how things are supposed to be done." Thanks!
While the eyes are a critical part of any portrait,
By: cshimokita : December 20th, 2016-08:08
it's never only about the eyes and even if shut they make a statement. In that second photo her eyes are more pensive than fully closed... which is a beautiful mood. Too bad the focus was off in the forth photo and except for her hair (camera left) it's a...